Showing posts with label A Noiseless Patient Spider. Show all posts
Showing posts with label A Noiseless Patient Spider. Show all posts

Sunday, March 1, 2009

A ghoul in relics

Following this ardent apology succeeds an argumentation vested in logic’s design:

Whitman’s use of the dash generates a quick movement of breath that mirrors in form the “speeding . . . unreeling” spider’s silken thread. The dash makes the poem, looming thrice at pivotal moments of movement—carrying the momentum of the creative mind in hasty pause. The Speaker imagines Whitman a diligent spider, endlessly weaving his Leaves of Grass in some cottage cranny, eight arms at full length, “ceaselessly musing”—birthing fine linen in ringlets of elegant line; forging and shaping an impulse of soul: a means of design meant to build “till the bridge you will need be formed, Till the ductile anchor hold”. Indeed, Whitman did mark where on a bluff a delicate spider perused its surroundings through lurches of silk, but arguably he did more than this:

“A noiseless patient spider,
I marked where on a little promontory it stood isolated,

Mark’d how to explore the vacant vast surrounding”

To mark; to etch on paper: to write—who is this spindling spider? Is it perhaps a vision of our pouncing poet, himself settled neatly in a seat off of a certain wooden (oak) desk—indeed a kind of little bluff? Our spidery poet—your silk has found crevice in the nooks of my moods: the threads of your “O my soul”, silver in substance, still fling in the winds of this gossamer ghoul.

Saturday, February 21, 2009

Whitman's Spider-like Space

What a happy coincidence!—She leafs through a “chronological” labyrinth of rhyme, and encounters a true anachronism: Whitman’s rhythmic measure; and our curious Speaker meanders impulsively into the coils of his silvery thread; suspending suspense as the gauze slithers in thin slivers of verse; a patient spider is he, not pouncing but pensively musing in feathers of fine resplendent line that he shan’t recant.

Oh DubyaDubya, your soul is a spider and the resplendent lines, the filaments, filaments, filaments, a verse that still seizes a moth-of-a-reader in inescapable awe—caught in your words, your filaments raw, she steps a weak foot on the bridge of your gossamer flings and flings down into measureless space, into the vast ocean of wordless pace, and pushing her down is your anchor that pulls as it holds and makes intimate folds in pearly threads of fine diaphanous verse. Your words commence play, and a happy incident indeed the feeling they breed.